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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh I thought of this rereading the story, for the title how about "Steaming" thanks again
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
TBC yes please, that was great. Definitelty want more of this pairing
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this. In fact, although I've read many more explicit stories this one got me more turned on than I've been in a while. Good work, hope you continue it. <3
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely ending! Ah i love anything where iruka makes the first move but this was exceptionally go . the fletchhing didn't bug me much and if some one oesn't like it they can always skip past it.
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, very hot. I's love to see it continued. You're right, that's a kink that's not put into a lot of stories, I think I've read it only once in another fandom, but I think it's kinda hot.
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing From PSP.
Wow, even though it's smut it seems 2 have a plot! X3
Nah I really liked it! Are you going 2 continue?!?! I hope so!
If your looking for a title still I was thinking...'Bath House Stranger(s)'
Hope you like it!!! CONTINUE SOON!
Mazoku Onna~(A.k.a Ritsu Chan)
Wow, even though it's smut it seems 2 have a plot! X3
Nah I really liked it! Are you going 2 continue?!?! I hope so!
If your looking for a title still I was thinking...'Bath House Stranger(s)'
Hope you like it!!! CONTINUE SOON!
Mazoku Onna~(A.k.a Ritsu Chan)