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for The Naruto Chronicles

by Zagger

person alboc
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Terrific fic, hope to see more of it.
person Cyraxr
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For your reader's choice foursome I vote for Tayuya, Anko, and Kyuubi(fem) they just seem like they would have a lot of fun with each other. Like the stories and keep up the good work. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, and Kurenai.
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FemSasuke? Not bad, but kinda weird (I hate Sasuke, but it was actually all right).
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Konan was good, but her personality was a little, er, wild. Manga had her nothing like that during her full appearance. Your fic, anyway. Keep it coming.
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter Can't Wait For The Next One.
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Have i ever told you how much i love you? no? well i do.

Two chapters/stories in two days, you are on fire.

NarutoKonan. While not one of my favorite pairings, you pulled it of very well... you made me a believer.

The battle between Naruto and Pein was quick, powerful and still done with only a handful of useful techniques, basically exactly how a Shinobi fight should be. I always thought it was a bit stupid that a battle between two senior shinobi (people who perfect the art of stealth and assassination) would last a long time, with flashy techniques being thrown back and forth. Theoretically the first or second attack should always be the deciding one.

Anyway, another A-level lemon, looking forward to the next one.

Malach Adonai
person Jin
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why do all these oneshot have to end in pregnancy?
person Menumber1.11
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and are you going to keep updating this fast?

P.S. you really should update power of 3
person HK
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oi.......try to be a bit more kinky....
person adolthered
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say that I really love your story ! Every chapter you'd written, It was like I'm reading a really good short-story. You can make your reader satisfied in the end of every chapter,I'm not talking about Lemon but the whole story ! Please update as soon as possible. I beg you.

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