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for Too Many Drinks!

by KoibitoFemme

person qwerty
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great ending. I'm surprised that Naruto hasn't learned his lesson... don't injest things from Sakura! Nice job.
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i adore kiko's corner esp. when he had u tied up i mean i like his time, yes. um *clears throat* ok well lets see the chapter was hilarious, the fugato terrors lmfao. they took over the runt squad's turf and man are they bad lil angels. and i must say oh dear, naru-chan preggers again and this time gaara might be stayin wit his sister lol. all in all i enjoyed reading this fic and cant wait for the side stories so hurry up ^_^
person charmpit
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a wild ride, a lot of fun, and it's on my recommended reading list. I can't wait to read more of your work! You are a fantastic writer. And did I mention that I am a die-hard GaaNaru shipper? You are officially one of my favorite fanfic writers.

Best of luck to you.
person mls
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story!!!!!!! I hope you make a sequel to it!!!!!!!!!!!!! You Did a great job!!! I always kept looking for more updates!!!!
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
weeeee that chapter was awsome but can i tell you somthing that happened after i got home from holidays so i get home from work.....i get in the door and call out "i'm home" well then my gf strolls out into the living room as i'm hanging up my coat i turn around to find her in a french maid outfit (the very baaaad variety) i'm starting to stare then i feel something wet under my nose so i reach up and i have a nose bleed so it actually happens she started laughing and was like "well i didn't know i had that much of an effect on you" it was weird. well i resolved the thing with my grandma sort of......i walked down stairs with my gf christmas morning kenzie was covered in hickies i was very satisfied with the look on her face ku,ku,ku hahaha very funny well as stated awsome chappie and i look forward to your other stories....and i enjoy kiko's corner. ja ne
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little sad that its over, but this is definitely the best mpreg story I've ever read! ::melts into a puddle: So hot and sexy and mmmm.... this website needs a favorites list.... AMAZING WORK!!! ::passes out due to noseleed::
person Anna
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read all of the chapters and I was so Happy with everything. This story was so great I hope you write another Gaara/Naruto story soon.
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story was amazing, you did it very well. I hope to see more stories from you.
person makiebelievie
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
absolutely funny. had me cracking up at one in the morning. you are an awesome writer and funny must come to you naturally. I have never laugh so hard reading fan fiction before in my life. great job and awesome story. :)
person Minjin
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woah~~~

so i read the whole 40 chapters in a day and i must say AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved the way you made GaaNarus relationship and that Gaara was so Seme!!! Every lemon scene was so hot *_* *noseblood* and wow you wrote this on pen? It must have took a lot of time =D

Shukaku and Kyuubi are already cute for me and the pic you draw of them awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so kawaii!!!!

Cant wait for the last chapeter!!! Gaanaru were so hot~~~~~*_*

More of this awesome piece please *_* :3

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