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for Scar Tissue

by JBMcDragon

schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was incredible. I couldn't stop reading until the last chapter came up. Sneaky Obito outfoxing Itachi like that. Very well crafted!!! Thank you for sharing.
person Nickname
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Review for 16:

Haha. What a sweet chapter. :) And very amusing. Especially the ending. Haha.

I love this story so much! Can't wait for more.

~ PP
person purplelev
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I have been reading your stories for awhile and I'm kind of embarrassed it took me this long to repley but here I am and I just want to say thanks for sharing your talent with us and that I look forward too all of your updates.
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gai is ever so amusing! XD

But I will say the distraction was rather enjoyable too.. -grins-

Keep it up!! Can't wait for more.. ^^
person Haowek
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! There's not that many Obito/Kakashi stories on aff so I was happy as hell to find this. =] Keep it up. :)
person Nickname
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, that was rounded off very nicely.

I love how you portrayed the relationship. Building up over time, and I love how you portrayed Obito's innocence. Hehe. Very well done.

Great job!

Regards,

~ PP
person Nickname
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter one and I'm hooked! Ooh, I can't wait to read the rest. I'll review every few chapters so as to not clutter up your reviews. :P

~ PP

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