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person Daga
schedule November 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I almost feel bad about my self because I love this pairing so much (Naruto's fourteen :O ) But I comfort myself that's entirely your fault cause you've made it so damn HOT. Jiraya was my favorite character from manga but I would never think of him an Naruto.... at least until now ;) Thanks... or not :P
person Legato
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is my absolute favourite Naruto pairing, too!! I loved the way you write and how you kept them in character. There should be more people writing about JirayaxNaruto, I think they're so perfect together! Thanks so much for sharing this! <3
person 8oo
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really don't understand why JiraNaru ISN'T popular. D:
I mean... He's sex on feet god dammit!!
And Naruto is adorable! Sexy plus adorable equals best pairing ever.
I bought a poster with Jiraiya and Naruto smiling and being all gay together.
Special. I love how you write. IT was sweet, hot, sexy, graphic, lol, and cute.
You should write moooore!
We need moooore JiraNaru!! <33
person Ellenlome
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O Whoa. *blinks and grins* HOTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *starts fangirling*

Great story! I give it three thumbs up and a 11/10! I love JiraNaru! :D *drools* XD
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, call me crazy but I think Pervy Sage is hot too. I don't know why but he is. To say he's the hottest, I wouldn't go that far. Kakashi is THE fucking HOTTEST thing to ever grace Naruto. But I digress, this was a gorgeous story, I sure hope you have more. In fact, I'm going to go check it out.
person Rosebud
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... So I don't usually read this pairing. (I think I read a one-shot a long time ago, but other then that...nope.) I can't say that its because I don't like them together either -- for the most part this pairing appeals to me in a positive way -- it's just that a lot of summaries don't intrigue me enough to click on the button and read the story. However...Your story did intrigue me and I obviously clicked on it, and... well, Damn, it was really hot! ^^ And when I got to the end, I wanted to read more!

I also love your style too; its very erotic. And I could definitely picture each scene and I knew exactly what you were talking about in regards to Naruto opening his mouth... And PWP, Haha, that's what I'm talking about babe! XD

Seriously though, I adore shota and these two are really Hot together. It was just recently that I was flipping through a Doujinshi, and I seen a Jiraya/Fourth pairing and so I'm loving that pairing too! Hehe! XD And your right, it is sad how certain shipping's don't get the love that they deserve! I am currently trying to "spread the love" with Suigetsu/Naruto, so I wish you MUCH luck with Jiraya/Naruto and if I ever find inspiration to write this pairing I will dedicate it to you!

Great story and I hope to read more soon! XD

(Sorry for ranting...)
~Crimson2006 ^^
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, i loved it! ^ ^ I've only seen two other stories w/Naruto and Jiraiya, I'm glad to see another, I'd write one, but eh...I have trouble with that, anyway, i hope you'll write another chapter ^ ^
person lee
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story! Never before have I even thought of this pairing, and kinda thought it would be odd. But I must say that this story gave me a new perspective on the idea.
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this pairing! This story was HOT!!! Nice writing style....WRITE MORE! lol
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG *dies from bloodloss* That was so HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ahem, please note my excitement :P
Day-am wow, that was amazing and I LOVED it!! Please write more like this, cause the world needs more of this pairing!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow, *fans herself* ahem, excuse me, I think I might go read that again.... *goes and gets a tissue box first* stupid blood nose....
P.S. I LOVE YOU!!!!! Thank you for writing this *glomp*

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