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for Silver Lining

by cynchick

person Pomona
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uhhh.. Yeah, that was hard. I get it you needed reason to make Sakura hardened and almost zombie-like and I appreciate the way she is now- really well created character. And I'm glad you will not make it so angsty furthermore :)
So now I wait for a second chapter, with Dei and newly-wed fun :)
Write soon!
person D.J
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!

Its finally here and Deidei is in it ^-^

I never really know how to critique so I don't review much. So I don't think I ever said it, but Perception was a a sheer joy to read.

You're right I fell in love with the way you wrote Deidei and its one of the best stories I've ever read.

You did a great job of pretty much keeping the Akatsuki in character whilst making them a bit more human for us.

Thank you for such an amazing story and I can't wait to read the rest of this, because I know its going to be just as enthralling to read.
person Todesengal
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* A sequel! Someone up there DOES love me!

And it's Deidara and Sakura! I am the beloved of the gods!
person lgardne6
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this so far despite all the tragic ends of almost every character possible. I look forward to the next chapter.
person MrsCake
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a lot of angst, but wonderfully done. Perfect set up for Deidara and Sakura to reunite. Can't wait for the next chap!
person roxnroll
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was the best. I was so shocked that the sequel was up so soon. I could feel her pain while you were describing the events. Can't wait to read the update.
Rox
person JacQuelyn
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I LOVE YOU! Fanfiction has been disappointing since Perception finished. I'm so glad you're writing this! Deidara does deserve a chance too! Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm so happy that you decided to write a sequal to perception! i can't wait for the next update... i think that sakura deserves a happy ending after all that she has lost. thank you for continuing this story! the first half was a pleasure to read, and i'm quite sure that this one will be the same as well.
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i was a tad teary eyed at the beginning i feel so bad for sakura. please continue cuse i loves perception and i know this story is going to be even better.
person hasu86
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
::clutches heart:: man, that was so damn depressing and sad yet beautiful, achingly beautiful. i'm glad you decided to do a sequel though, and to make it a dei/saku too! ::pumps hand into the air:: it definitely is promising though and awesomely well written, as always!! i wait with bated breath for the next chapter! continue soon!
-hasu86

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