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for Broken Wish Fulfilled

by Carola

schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was . . . awesome. Words seem to have failed me, which, as anyone who knows me could tell you, is a huge compliment in itself. I love it.

Kunai and kisses, Dina-chan
person Anon
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nifty. I don't have much to add. It was a pleasure to read and therefore since you requested it recieves a review.
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so bittersweet....*tears up a little*
person animelover
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is beautful ... breathtakingly, heartachingly beautiful. Tragic, yeah, but moving all the same.
person cynaga
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant -
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*snif*snif*
this was so wonderful and tragic and..and perfect!!! QoQ
poor naru-chan...
come back sasuke, you meany!!!>O<
*runs after him*
*takes aleash*
*drags him back to naruto*
-binds them together*
and never ever leave him again!!!!

ahem, sry, got carried away...^^'''
anyway; i've to say once more that this was a wonderful story...*gives an A+*
person blueh
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
T.T Poor Naruto... he has to wait for Sasuke still. Come back, Sasuke! Don't leave Naruto all alone anymore! Oh well, it's useless.

Anyway, I really enjoyed the story. It's very sweet. Just not the Sasuke walking away part. It's heartbreaking. *hands you some cookies and milk* this is for your wonderful story.
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was good. Tragic love stories...I love them!
person Word_Slave
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay, so damn, that was sad. But could you write a second chapter when Sasuke comes home? A happy one??
Slave

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