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by Rosebud

schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful!

I loved it so much that somewhere at the beginning of the middle I had to sign off MSN so people would stop bothering me while I read.

You have such great use of details and go into the depths of emotions so well it almost hurts to read. And the fact that this was just a rambling because you had writers block was even more amazing, just goes to show the truth strength in writing you have.

Well before I turn stalker obsessive like in my review I'll stop here and say I loved it ^_^
person Ilene
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it! I hope ur writersblock is unclogged soon!
I liked how u portrayed itachi, I could really feel the impending slaughter and how (in his mind) it was justified, and why he disliked sasuke so much. <3

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