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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeesh. I liked it, but--OW! Ah, well, I was forewarned by the title.... I liked the way you described the curse seal taking over; that was cool. Nice surprise ending, too. And the last thoughts leave a lot to the imagination. ^_^
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes Yes YES! GHHJGHgGH *thankyou* so much for writing eBil!Kyuubi and a CS2!Sasuke to sink your teeth into [mmm...*chomps*] and I love that Sasuke strikes back instead of just *taking* it [as if he ever would], which goes to show that IC!Sasuke is still the best whether seme, uke or whatever and I'm tempted to pester you for more but, yeah, oneshot *grumbles* and you end on a snazzy note...
For supposed PWP/smut this actually makes more sense and has more plot than most, so kudos for that *hearts*
And I love that Sasuke's somewhat of a masochist [perfect for sadist!Kyuubi, really ;p] and instead of breaking down into tears [or something equally WTF?_?] cheerfully [?_?] plots reciprocating in kind, because SPESHUAL guy that he is, beating someone up/getting beat in return is his idea of a love confession...*o*
There are a couple typos if you care [I don't] such as 'dick further into Sasuke’s *bowls*' [I lie, because I have no life and spotting things like that amuse me ;D], and is it bad that I've dubbed KyuNaru/CS2Sasu rough lovin' as 'Fox-eats-Duck-love'?
And of course Sasuke's more angry that Naruto tops [btw, does he refer to KyuNaru as Naruto because he refuses to distinguish the two or just to be a pissy bastard?_?] because in his world, sex between rivals is just another excuse for posturing...so glad to see their priorities never do change, as well as their combined maturity level in one-upping[topping] each other ;p hell, even big bad Kyuubi has his priorities, ie: KILLEATKILL, warped by 23yrs with Naruto's dobeness and 10+yrs of Sasuke-obsession, and inadvertently ends up playing matchmaker. Go figure.
Poor Kyuubi. Couldn't even get a good rape in, in the end 'cause Konoha screws him over once more [which was a fantastic twist by the way, and if I knew how I'd favourite this] and poor Sasuke for having to demean himself with the orange [he likes it really, though that wasn't what he meant by 'getting into idiot's pants' *snort*] ...and I'd love to have seen what the others were thinking when they found Naruto half-starkers [was he?] and Sasuke looking all...*satisfied*
- Sleepy
For supposed PWP/smut this actually makes more sense and has more plot than most, so kudos for that *hearts*
And I love that Sasuke's somewhat of a masochist [perfect for sadist!Kyuubi, really ;p] and instead of breaking down into tears [or something equally WTF?_?] cheerfully [?_?] plots reciprocating in kind, because SPESHUAL guy that he is, beating someone up/getting beat in return is his idea of a love confession...*o*
There are a couple typos if you care [I don't] such as 'dick further into Sasuke’s *bowls*' [I lie, because I have no life and spotting things like that amuse me ;D], and is it bad that I've dubbed KyuNaru/CS2Sasu rough lovin' as 'Fox-eats-Duck-love'?
And of course Sasuke's more angry that Naruto tops [btw, does he refer to KyuNaru as Naruto because he refuses to distinguish the two or just to be a pissy bastard?_?] because in his world, sex between rivals is just another excuse for posturing...so glad to see their priorities never do change, as well as their combined maturity level in one-upping[topping] each other ;p hell, even big bad Kyuubi has his priorities, ie: KILLEATKILL, warped by 23yrs with Naruto's dobeness and 10+yrs of Sasuke-obsession, and inadvertently ends up playing matchmaker. Go figure.
Poor Kyuubi. Couldn't even get a good rape in, in the end 'cause Konoha screws him over once more [which was a fantastic twist by the way, and if I knew how I'd favourite this] and poor Sasuke for having to demean himself with the orange [he likes it really, though that wasn't what he meant by 'getting into idiot's pants' *snort*] ...and I'd love to have seen what the others were thinking when they found Naruto half-starkers [was he?] and Sasuke looking all...*satisfied*
- Sleepy
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October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was different from your other writings, but I like the fact that you are trying different styles and plots (or lack of) Nice job.
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October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe that was soooo awesome, please oh please all mighty author please make a sequel, i wanna read about sasuke's payback, that was so well done too, very original idea, never seen one with a CS2 sasuke :P
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October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was awsome let me now when u wrie another chapter or a nother story,