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for The Guardian

by Midnightstorm

person beekayz
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg I love this story so much! I love the idea of a younger Sasuke and an older Naruto. The combination makes for total hotness, not to mention your amazing writing skills! I read the doujinshi that inspired you and omg <3. XD I can't wait for an update to see what happens now that bitch is out of the way! >:D
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHH keep on going!! I make sure to look everyday to see if you have an update because you are very quick with them and I like where the story is going. I hope Naruto gives Sakura the smack down seriously! Hahahaha! And I hope Sasuke and Naruto get together soon because they are so wonderful together!! LOVE THEM!! Keep up the great work!
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I've read this story on FF.Net. How come you're starting all over again and not updating there instead? :S
Anyway, I LOVE it!! I was a bit upset when I saw this here, went to check on FF to see if you had updated there and it was still the same last chapter. :(
When are you going to update there?

ps: I'm not giving anything away but Sasuke is a plotting devil...*zps mouth shut and apologizes with eyes* That was a pun by the way...didn't mean it literally. Please update soon!!
person ringpop
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHH UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person ringpop
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW SHIT! TAHT WAS THE end???? I love THIS STORY!!!
person despairs
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi told Sakura bitch off LOL. This is one reason why he's one of my favorite characters ;) Great chapter!
person despairs
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naruto shouldve dumped the bitch a long time ago *sulks* :|
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome. Thank you, can't wait to see what happens next.
person Word_Slave
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello... Write it in one day... could you be much more mean??? Add more soon. (course it's not like I should talk, considering my fics, but...) More soon please
Slave
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

You stopped there?! *falls on knees with tears streaming down face* PLEASE!!! Please for the love of Pete update as quickly as possible!!! I'll beg more if I have to!!!

Man Sakura is sooo immature it made me laugh.....D: Naruto is sick NOOOOOOOOOOOO _-_

I love this story :D can't wait for more!

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