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for The Guardian

by Midnightstorm

person Anon
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG naruto's sick!? Sasuke will make it all better, I'm glad sakura dumped naruto-this way sasuke can "console" him! :)
update soon pleze!
person Yuikey
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story. Poor naruto
person Dynamo
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooo great chapter, i cant wait till that bitchy sakura gets what she deserves! weeeell please update soon! FEED MY ADICTION!!!
person Haowek
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I always look forward to reading your updates! One of my fav. stories about Naruto and Sasuke. :)
person despairs
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woo the lemony part of chapter 4 was soooo freakin good. More please lol.

I really hope one of the 'loose ends' you spoke of is SAKURA ugh. She needs to go :P

I get really happy when i see your updates! Just wanna let ya know you do very good!
person LadyWolf
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dump the bitch!!!!!!!!!!! I'm sorry, I just don't like Sakura, in this fic!!!

I have a feeling this is going to get alot better. Hell, it's already good!!!!
person cynaga
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
delightful story!
person Anon
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay you're back, finally!!! I have read one other of your stories, (I don't remember the title but sounded like 'deal of love' or 'dealing with love') and I totally loved it.

I'm happy to read another story of yours, and it seems to me that this is going to be a very good story too...

anyway, good work. keep on writing^_^ bye
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Finally an update! I love this story! I found it on TONFA a while ago and I forgot the name ^^; Thank you for finally updating *starry eyed*

Looking forward to the next update!
person despairs
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like how this story is developing although my one and only complaint is....Sakura. *Sigh* i just cant stand her. I hope Naruto wakes up soon and sees that he is better off without her. I liked the kiss scene at the end of chapter 3 too...well done.

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