rate_review Reviews

Nice job. I look forward to more from you.

wow.... that was definantly some A+ PWP. i love reading your stories, i cant wait for the next update of "memories of the future". until your next update... Ja Ne

almost forgot.... WOOT I GOT THE FIRST REVIEW!!!!!

well i liked it it was pretty funny well if that had been me in that situation and i didn't want any i would have found a way to get on top of the towel rack yeah thats right i'm a climber. anyway okay this isn't related to anything but it's funny so here's a joke 3 men are in a bathtub one farts which one was it.......don't know it was the 3rd one cause the other to have their butts pluged. give it a second why would their butts be pluged hehehe.

You succeeded beautifully honey XD. I must admit the confession at the end threw me, but, *snicker* I know those scanlations your talking about so, yeah you Pwn. I just hadn't expected it from you XD. But I must say the smut was hella sexy, very messy and carnal, and OMG, Younger Naru-seme was Hott Hott HOTT. LOL, This would make an excellent addition to sensitive pornograph XD. Did you say you have a longer story planned? Or are you actually making a doujinshi??

Brilliant! You did indeed succeed. More please.

dude, i loved it. I admit it was a little cheesy at the end, but as you say, in the original manga n/c smut style, they do confess at the end. you wrote this fic so well, i loved it! i can't wait to read more fic's by you... until then, this is midnight saying, ja.

I agree that sometimes your reading along and then there's these outlandish confessions at the end, but honestly, would I be happier if Sasuke stood up and murdered Naruto? Or perhaps called the police and had everyone's asses put in jail? Or jumped off a building because he's Uchiha pride was hurt?? Nah, bring on the yaoi fluff and mindless confessions. ;)