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Realistic, well written, and with two of my favorite characters. I really hope i run into more of your work in the future.
:3

HOTTEST. FIC. EVER. This was amazing. You seriously deserve an award for the hottest Shikamaru / Neji fic of all time. Thank you. Just thank you.

And I also have to add that Neji riding Shikamaru made my brain explode with goodness that went something like, "AOSIFJLSDKFJSD:FJSODFIJ!*U(*#$@" The dirty talk was great. I just love the way you write. Okay, I think that's enough hahaha. E-mail me at badluck4129@yahoo.com if you ever need someone to read more fics like this before posting. For grammar or whatnot.

Oh my gosh!
That was so frigging hot!
Neji makes the sexiest uke, and I have to say Shika's the best seme for him. xDD
Meh, all that smexiness.. -still drooling-

Wonderful work this was, and I hope we will be seeing a lot more of ShikaNeji in future too!
This was yummy!

Sorry I have not replied sooner. I have been busy and neglecting putting a lot of concentration on things other than school. Bad me bad. Anyways. I am glad you did not change the ending very much. I like it. Nevertheless, that is just me. It is not complete, but enough that the reader can feel happy and think on the issue more if they so desire. I know during this time of year it is hard to write so congratulations on pushing through all the tough finals, mid-terms, computer problems, and writers block that you have had to fight through so far this year. Thanks! Keep on writing; it does not matter what you write. This is a good side story. There is always room for improvement, so do not let yourself get stuck in a rut!

Finally you put this up!!! So happy!!!!! -chuckles- Actually I really did like this chapter. It was cute in a way about how the two finally got it in gear. Nice to know that Neji fully recovered and is not stalking the Hokage anymore ^_-. Theres one qoute I fell in love with when reading the story: "Shikamaru’s lazy ‘I don’t give a shit’ attitude had forced him to get closer to him." I find that funny. But, over all and to sum it all up, Good job!!! -big thumps up- *hands out Botan and Ramue*

I love this pairing!
Ah, and Neji's so sexy when blushing. xDD
I hope you update soon again!
I can't wait 'till you post the next part of this!
Keep writing.

Heh, nice one... i want to know what happened next, so PLEASE continue!!!

AHHHHH!!!! More please your good at detail and...MORE!

*eyebrow twitch* You will be updateing soon right? *glar damning you do so with out hesatasion*