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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11: Whoa, the Hokage is hurt that bad? Yeesh. Naruto really did a number on her, didn’t he? . . . This is funny, Sakura’s lecture. . . . I thought it was just a mark like a seal, not a jewel. . . . I love it how Ino immediately gets the guys to help her and they’re all like “Aw man, no.”
With fame comes groupies. It’s a way of nature. . . . Temari gets giggly when drunk? Interesting. . . . Yeah, Temari, scare them off, that’s my girl. ^_^ . . . Ooh, good line: “Or you could take lessons from that Uchiha glaring so hard over there.” I like the idea of “glaring so hard.” . . . Nice line, Shikamaru: “I would like to still have a wife when I leave tonight.” I love his dryness. X) . . . Whoa, the message sure is one way to kill the mood. . . . Jeez, Sakura, go easy on her. Hinata’s nice, darnit. . . . Uh-oh. Sasuke might be more of a threat than Hinata could ever possibly be.
With fame comes groupies. It’s a way of nature. . . . Temari gets giggly when drunk? Interesting. . . . Yeah, Temari, scare them off, that’s my girl. ^_^ . . . Ooh, good line: “Or you could take lessons from that Uchiha glaring so hard over there.” I like the idea of “glaring so hard.” . . . Nice line, Shikamaru: “I would like to still have a wife when I leave tonight.” I love his dryness. X) . . . Whoa, the message sure is one way to kill the mood. . . . Jeez, Sakura, go easy on her. Hinata’s nice, darnit. . . . Uh-oh. Sasuke might be more of a threat than Hinata could ever possibly be.
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!
An thus, a new era of cloning began in Konohagure...
An thus, a new era of cloning began in Konohagure...
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey your story is great i would love to know when you update
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great last two chapters!!!
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I add chapters when you guys review....simple...Oh! I love this fic by the way : ]
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What are they going to do now? duhduhduh! Oh, dear They really are in a mess now. ( a hot and sticky mess) Will Sakura find out? Will the concil?
Awesome chapter can't wait for more.
=)
Awesome chapter can't wait for more.
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god I realy love this story!a new chapter is here!!!
I read the whole story in one day!(while I had to study for my exam^^)
u rock!I prefer susuke as the seme but this story is soo good that I dont care.
more pleaseeeeeeeee
I read the whole story in one day!(while I had to study for my exam^^)
u rock!I prefer susuke as the seme but this story is soo good that I dont care.
more pleaseeeeeeeee
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahaha YAY! They finally got together (offically)! What a way to celebrate becoming Hokage! ;)
But yeah, what are they gonna do now? I'd like to suggest getting Sakura involved and writing some threesomes... but I doubt that not only will that not work with the story, half your fan base will probably revolt! I have no idea what you're going to do to resolve this, but I can't wait to find out! Keep up the great work! I'll be here, waiting. ^^ hehehe~
But yeah, what are they gonna do now? I'd like to suggest getting Sakura involved and writing some threesomes... but I doubt that not only will that not work with the story, half your fan base will probably revolt! I have no idea what you're going to do to resolve this, but I can't wait to find out! Keep up the great work! I'll be here, waiting. ^^ hehehe~
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very Hot... although now Naruto is in a rather nasty little bind... hopefully he and Sasuke can figure out how to get out of it without anyone getting too hurt.
Update soon.
-Akiru-
Update soon.
-Akiru-
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!!
Thank You.
Thank You.