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November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a very good mini-fic. I loved that it started in the middle and captured a brief moment of loneliness between two people. It was very well done.
Keep up the good work. ^^
Keep up the good work. ^^
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!! I loved it! Absolutely loved it!
Oh man it was just so wonderful, you have to feel so bad for the both of them it just tears at you a bit. Heh, I liked the, "Old enough to kill, old enough to drink." Part...so true and even sadder @_@
You'd kinda like to hope that just maybe after words maybe some where way down the road they can form a happy couple together but I just love this ending anyways *fan of angst*
Great job!!
Oh man it was just so wonderful, you have to feel so bad for the both of them it just tears at you a bit. Heh, I liked the, "Old enough to kill, old enough to drink." Part...so true and even sadder @_@
You'd kinda like to hope that just maybe after words maybe some where way down the road they can form a happy couple together but I just love this ending anyways *fan of angst*
Great job!!