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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor baby. it'll all be worth it in the end... hopefully
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damnit u really luv ur cliffhangers grrrr, please update soon, i soooo can't wait to see that little lemon u spoke of hehe, please hurry :P
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really hot into leaves you wanting more it great
i didn't like instead of cutting the story off when he read the instructions you have the lyrics to the song play (but cutting off right before he read the instructions is a great cliffy)
but thats just me
keep going
i didn't like instead of cutting the story off when he read the instructions you have the lyrics to the song play (but cutting off right before he read the instructions is a great cliffy)
but thats just me
keep going
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm always amazed by all these authors who write these fantastic little pieces, then admit that English isn't their first language. What. The. Hell. O_O
You people have a greater understanding of the English language than most of my fellow Americans, whom I know for a fact can't string a sentence together for shit. >_<
You guys are making us look bad. lol. Keep up the good work! :D Nice intro chapter. ^^
You people have a greater understanding of the English language than most of my fellow Americans, whom I know for a fact can't string a sentence together for shit. >_<
You guys are making us look bad. lol. Keep up the good work! :D Nice intro chapter. ^^
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eep!! :s i take it ur a fan of the Saw movies lol, well besides the gore i liked the first chapter, can't wait to see what they want from lil naruto ,hopefully some yaoi coming up, and the only spelling mistake that annoyed me was when u tried to spell 'example' no 'c' or 's' required, please update soon :P