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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi!Hey i really liked this story!And i think you're a better writer than you give yourself credit for...Can't wait for the next chapter!Sorry if I write anything wrogn, english is not my first language.
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
definitely better writen than the first chapter. i liked the different perspective in this chappie.. are you going to continue with that for the whole fic?
anyway, keep updating~
anyway, keep updating~
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hope the next chapter will be out soon ^_^
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Definitely interesting. You describe Naruto's heat with ferocity and it makes me actually feel his want. Thats really talented, I give you cudos for that! :)
You left me hanging once again! Update soon please, I can't wait for the next chapter ! :)
You left me hanging once again! Update soon please, I can't wait for the next chapter ! :)
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhh!!!! This chapter is intense!! As good as the first one :D
I was really happy when I saw that you had updated. I was waiting for the next chapter and when I could read it I was overjoy! It was really good! The character were once again IC and the way you describe Naruto's feelings is just awesome. I really want to know whta will happen next. XD
By the way, I'm happy that you decided to turn this fic into a story and not just a PWP.
Well, continue your wonderful work :D I'll be waiting for the next chapter XD
I was really happy when I saw that you had updated. I was waiting for the next chapter and when I could read it I was overjoy! It was really good! The character were once again IC and the way you describe Naruto's feelings is just awesome. I really want to know whta will happen next. XD
By the way, I'm happy that you decided to turn this fic into a story and not just a PWP.
Well, continue your wonderful work :D I'll be waiting for the next chapter XD
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hellow again!! im happy you updated! i loved this chapter~
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up, Ill be looking for the next chapter.
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*holds on to a baseball bat threatingly* You better update and soon, you!
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please :D
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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh... I would so like to read more... i are intrigued...