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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was a really good fic i really felt like crying it touched me.
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was a very good first fanfic but it was kinda hard to follow what was going on at points because of the names being the same but the lines helped a bit. you might want to put spaces next time but over all i enjoyed it a lot. It was a cute story. Props for that... :D can't wait to see more of your work.
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee- That totally made my day XDDDD -jumps around all excitedly- I love the final product you did really good! I love Sasuke at the end so cute XDDD and Naruto's reaction priceless!! -applauds and give ramune- Write more!!!