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for Truth long overdue

by takenaka

schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW *squee* How cute! i do love the ending. it feels much more complete, like full circle. Well done, *munches on cookie* ^__^
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very cute story.
=)
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not bad, well written. though a little too short for my liking.. it was more like an excerpt than a one shot, you know? but you have talent! looking fwd to your future work :)
person Jelp
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Emotional, short, and to the point. Nicely done. Other than my personal preference to have a space between each paragraph for easier reading, good fic. :-) ~ Jelp

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