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Very nice. This looks to be a very promising fic. Though, seeing as it's been nearly 3 weeks since it was updated, I sincerely hope this doesn't turn out to be one of the many "Great start, then dead in the water" fics.

Im loving this story so far! Damn perverted genma.. He's such a sleeze!
I can't wait for the next chapters! Write fast!! xD *hugs*

Interesting beginning. I've got a question though, and it may make me seem like a blond, but I'll ask anyway. Just to be clear in the prologue, it was one of the victims, and not Sakura, who was raped? Right? I don't know why I'm unsure about that, but I want to make sure I didn't misunderstand it. I just hope Sakura is not raped in this one like your other story, because I really don't like when that happens, and I don't want to read that happening to her two stories in a row by you. Anyway, I do like how you wrote Sakura is timid around men with a good explanation to it. It adds a different quality to her. But I do find her out of character in the morgue scene. She's been training for a few years in the medic field and has been on missions where her skills are needed, so I don't think she would be 'that' squeamish when asked by Tsunade to give her opinion on the body (then again, considering what happened to the victim, it would be understandable). So, I can't wait to read what happens next. Like, how does Kakashi become her husband instead of Genma? Hmm? And that was a great bit about Tsunade getting Genma to wear that tuxedo. I could totally see how funny that would look. Good job.

This is really good. I can't wait to read what you have planned.
Rox

This sounds like a really good story. I can't wait to see how Kakashi ends up as Sakura's husband. Please update soon.

love this fic. not written in that annoying composed by someone who takes english as a second language and doesnt understand the grammar. the characterization is good too. all though sakura is a little subdued.