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by lexjamandme

person animelover
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i almost forgot ... that line where Fuguko asks Naru if his boys "tattling" is his influence WAS THE BOMB!!!!!! my cats looked at me crosseyed while I laughed hysterically. LOL!
person qwerty
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter. I liked the flashbacks b/c I really want to know more about Naruto's past. Really great chapter.
update
person Kimra
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story and can't wait to read more. :D
person Damp
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GODDAMNIT!! I CAN'T TAKE IT!!

-Damp *The suspense is KILLING ME!!*
person Imagy
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I totally squeeled when I saw that a new chapter had been posted
not that you don't update regularly
gods no..
but it's that I am just so in love with this story
AND NAOKI
OMFG HE'S SO CUTE~!
such an adorable little Chee-ha ^o^
can't wait to see what happens next, lovey
caoi for now~!
person TimeFlys
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10: Thank you for the lemonade! It was very yummy! XD lol – The kids were an unexpected, (but pleasant) surprise. I love the four-year-old deciding Naruto was his. (Very CUTE!) Can’t wait till the next chapter. Maybe we’ll have enough lemons to have a full glass of lemonade. (Sends hopeful look towards author…)

Thanks for the update.
person Leeana69
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!!

Itachi is such a bastard, but that's why we love him right?

I love the cubicle blitz of 07, that made me laugh. I think my mom thinks I'm nuts now...oh well, she thought I was nuts before.

Hugs and kisses,
Leeana69
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I am now officially obsessed with this story. I seriously cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!

took me long enough to finally read it, but if truth be told I thought it was an itasasu and i rly dont like those. I feel really stupid now. But happy non the less. better late then never neh?

Dace
person Damp
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Et tu, Brutus?

Nani??

-Damp *I love how this story is coming out!!*
person drivven
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was the best roller coaster! I laughed, I cried (I sound soo incredibly corny) See? You did that! Awesome, just wonderful. More please and soon I hope *crosses fingers*

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