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by lexjamandme

schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to see what else is going to happen. Seems like poor Naruto is the only 'live one' in the whole group!!!
person gaara89
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update this soon! It's funny and sweet and I can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I prepared myself this time so I'm not out of breath from laughter, just a little lightheaded. But there were a couple of squishy moments! Yay! All I can say about Naruto's first interaction with Gai is "Poor sunshine *snicker*" but I do feel sorry for the chibi Naruto. And the exceutives cheating on their sheets? BAD EXECS BAD *shakes finger at executives* GO Naruto you tell 'em honey *hands Naruto Green Beast repellent* And Sasuke getting interested in Naruto's past gives me both the giggles and the warm fuzzies. Wonderful chapter.
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I loved Chapter 3! The part where Naruto was asking for sugar and cherries and ramen was too cute, and I wanted to glomp him so bad.

Also, the part where both teams were standing there and a tumbleweed blew by. Haha, I about snorted the water I was drinking out of my nose. I couldn't stop laughing.

Anywho, update soon, please! =]
person animelover
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dang, that was a fast update, and you didn't even need to be bribed! and it was just as hilarious as the last chapter .. especially the flashback where naru met gai. could i have the name and phone number of your muse, 'cause this stuff is just off the hook! ;-)

thanx for sharing and see you soon!
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. Guy is so evil! So crazy youthful, but we love him for it... well at least we stand him. ;P
I can't wait for more I love this story.
=)
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I could not stop laughing. This is an awesome story. Love it! Must update religiously!
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yet again another, dare I say I say it,...AWESOME chapter. Can't wait for the next one. Oh, and "Purging Your Life" (I apologize if I screwed up the title) was brilliant. I'll be sitting at my laptop waiting for your next chapter.
person Hilary
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would just like to say that this is probably one of the best AU stories I have ever read... besides your first story. It is just a great fresh idea that I haven't really seen! Have you ever thought of doing the "before" story of this story. Chibi Naru growing up with Kakashi and Iruka is just so cute, I would love to see that story as well. Anyway, great chapter! Keep up the good work!
person Imagy
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LAWL
"growing up"
I love that
XD

can't wait to see what happens next ^.^
later, babe~!

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