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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(I review as I read.)
Heh. The matter-of-fact tone the first paragraph takes on amuses me. =) . . . . What Sasuke said about Naruto surprised me. I wouldn’t have expected that of Naruto. But I like the way the first scene ended. That was great. :heart: (damn hearts aren’t working)
I like the swift progression of the story. How it’s all factual. . . . So how come Sasuke has to follow those rules? (*pout*) . . . . I like the emphasis in, “Naruto was hot, but Itachi was a God.” (By the way, you misplaced the “/” in the next sentence.) . . . . Well, that was nice, Itachi letting Sasuke join in. 9_9 . . . . (*blinks*) Wow. Never read a threesome of three guys before.
(*blinks*) Already? Man, they’ve got energy.
I liked it. I liiiked it. (*drooool*) I wish this could’ve spun out into a plot, cuz I’m sure it would’ve been fun, but I enjoyed this one. ^_^ :heart:
Heh. The matter-of-fact tone the first paragraph takes on amuses me. =) . . . . What Sasuke said about Naruto surprised me. I wouldn’t have expected that of Naruto. But I like the way the first scene ended. That was great. :heart: (damn hearts aren’t working)
I like the swift progression of the story. How it’s all factual. . . . So how come Sasuke has to follow those rules? (*pout*) . . . . I like the emphasis in, “Naruto was hot, but Itachi was a God.” (By the way, you misplaced the “/” in the next sentence.) . . . . Well, that was nice, Itachi letting Sasuke join in. 9_9 . . . . (*blinks*) Wow. Never read a threesome of three guys before.
(*blinks*) Already? Man, they’ve got energy.
I liked it. I liiiked it. (*drooool*) I wish this could’ve spun out into a plot, cuz I’m sure it would’ve been fun, but I enjoyed this one. ^_^ :heart:
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very hot.
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow... that was.. HOTTTT!! like really really hot
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*tries to stem intensely bleeding nose with no luck*
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ri: *pokes T.W.* She passed out Ebisu style *pokes T.W. again* Oi Tee wake up and review.
T.W.: *mumbles and rolls away from Ri's poking finger without waking up*
Ri: *vein pops* Alright that's it! *pulls out mini siren and holds it near T.W.'s ear* Wakey wakey my little puppet *turns siren on*
T.W.: *jumps up and clings to ceiling like a cartonn cat* WHAT THE HELL?!
Ri: Ah you're awake, good.
T.W.: Ri you fucking sadist! What the hell was that for?!
Ri: That was to get your ass up to review Mayumi's ItaSasuNaru.
T.W.: *grumbles about evil sadistic muses then turns to Mayumi-chan* Nosebleedingly delicious darling and just the pick me up I needed after the hell my day has been *huggles you and giggles* Good job hun.
T.W.: *mumbles and rolls away from Ri's poking finger without waking up*
Ri: *vein pops* Alright that's it! *pulls out mini siren and holds it near T.W.'s ear* Wakey wakey my little puppet *turns siren on*
T.W.: *jumps up and clings to ceiling like a cartonn cat* WHAT THE HELL?!
Ri: Ah you're awake, good.
T.W.: Ri you fucking sadist! What the hell was that for?!
Ri: That was to get your ass up to review Mayumi's ItaSasuNaru.
T.W.: *grumbles about evil sadistic muses then turns to Mayumi-chan* Nosebleedingly delicious darling and just the pick me up I needed after the hell my day has been *huggles you and giggles* Good job hun.
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oops I made an html code mistake that put all my review in bold *chuckles sheepishly* Sorry 'bout that. I've been clumsy all over the place today.
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oohhh sweetie, I loved it! Sasuke x Naruto and Itachi...*drools* very hot!