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for My sweet Valentine

by kinai26

person Madamdragon

schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Aw that was soo sweet. Glad they both ended up happy!

person YamiKaeko

schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM

that was defintly sweet hehehe! Loved it!

person Apythii

schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Um, just to let you know...I'm almost positive that keiko means practice, training, or study. Several Japanese-English dictionaries seem to agree with me. Beloved is actually more like koishii or saiai. Also, you may want to diversify your adjectives and dialogue choices. They seemed very run-of-the-mill.

person charmpit

schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM

SasuNaru hotness. Yes.

person ProfessorSibly

schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM

*After tissues, blood transfusion, and Minor heart attack.* ... Wow.......

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