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by Zrina

person Nikana
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh! my precious! we are not Adi, but we plea for a sequel. You are so good at this! Are you sure you are not an undercover writer? I mean you already are a wonderful one but, aren't you someone famous under a penname? hummm! just rambling...please add at least one more chapter, just to shove Sasuke's words down his pretty troath and something else just because we are at it ^^
master piece as usual O/_\O
person noface
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SEQUEL! Must make SEQUEL. *demands* You never fail to impress when putting those two together. I love how your Naruto is so darn manly, but still Naruto. And your Sasuke, brilliant. Please make a sequel, actually, even a multi-chapter fic would do, in fact, that would be great! Love the AU and love the boys! Keep it going, more more more.

SKS
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Message to Adi: Please demand a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Shosuro
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!
That was a sad lovely one shot if you had left it alone and not show that Naruto was going to be able to go to college.
On the other hand I love the way you hooked it so nicely. It makes me want to sit here at the computer and wait for the next chapter.
I love the aggression that you show from both of them and the longing.....nice touch.

Hope to see more from you,

Shosuro
person elochai
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
huh-ha! this story is AWESOME!!!!! i would love to see a follow up. hopefully you'll get inspired someday. :)
person Allys
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG Zrina!! I hope Adi's already jumped on your case!!! Gods... LOL, Why am I always amazed when you blow me away?? I came into this knowing it would be good. Your work always is. But, heh... sometimes I think I forget exactly how good. I loved the descriptions and of course the dynamic you set up. How you described their relationship and Sasuke's doubt and just his wanting and cluelessness. I loved it, it always seems so genuine. And then just the dirtiness of it all XD. *Snicker* - Qwiky Lube XD. LOL, and Naruto's hands and job the grime and sweat and heat, I... just... Damn. *Starry eyed* I love how you write Sasuke. He's still an acerbic bastard, just with a soft fluffy centre that he'll deny to his grave. Yeah yeah there's some ice in ther, but I swear it's wrapped in fluff XD. And Naruto, always just that much more in touch with what he wants. So true. Although, *smiles slyly* Sasuke can be pretty single minded when he he finally figures it out (ala B&B XD). Gods that's so one of the things I love about your writing. The spot on-ness. And the romance of it! *Fangirls* cause at the end of the day, Naruto gets to go too. This couldn't just be a fantastic one "night" stand. No!! We have to have something to look forward to and make our little fangirl hearts beat double time XD. I love how you write!!! I love you, you're so sweet! LOL, you are my official drug dealer. Helping to supply the drugs that keep this poor body moving *huggles u* Thank you!!!! *Chuu* ♥
person Tastes Like Chicken
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The only thing I like better then the lemon is the ending. Classy, classy ending!
person PossessedMuse
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sequel would be very hot

PossessedMuse *_*
person Jaden
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bwahaha
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome.
I love to see a sequal.

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