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hot... smoking, skin scorching HOT!

This is so hot and lovely :) and you did manage to make them feel like equals - that's great, this sort of balance is something most fandom authors stumble over and never quite succeed in portraying

wow!!!! Is there going to be more, you know with Sasuke getting all dominant???? Please
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LOVE, LOVE, LOVED IT! Thanks for sharing.

so hawt~!

Dude, my heart is bursting, and I am grinning like a fucking idiot XD. *sighs happily* That was ridiculously fantastic! *Loves on you*. From beginning to end, all the preparation, the dance scene, the realisations the absolute freaking hotness! Completely drool-worthy, while totally overwhelmingly romantically Perfect. I loved especially that you wrote them as equals. Sasuke claimed it and it was completely true. I love when there's no absolute seme or uke between them. I find that so limiting, this was so wonderful *HUGS U*. THANK YOU!!! And OMFG you said FaR is coming soon *dies of happy* You have no idea how intensely happy you've made me XD. Thank you :). *chuu*♥

loved it!!!!! i hope there will be more to this story!!!

Beiful work, love. I downloaded the song and read this while listening to it. I gotta say, the effect was impressive. If this is the product of you listening dirty music, I wholeheartedly encourage you to do it more oftren! I especially liked how neither Naruto nor Sasuke were portrayed as too uke-ish. The equal relationship you hinted at was a refreshing thing indeed after all the stories where one of them is firmly bottom, and the other constantly top. Once again, great work and congratulations on a job well done! Kisses, hon!

wow..really amazing. i love narusasu(you know that, hehe) so im grateful that anyone with good writing skills posts something like this. kudos. i want the end of my story to be something like this.. though how im gonna do it i have no idea.. this was awesome. i would love to see more stories from you.

Brilliant!