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September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm.... That WAS rather dark-ish... I mean I would be interested to see Naruto's POV on this, ya know? Like how maybe it IS slightly no-con or how maybe he actually has heard Sasuke say those words...
I really like how this one has me thinking! It left me with a deep impression and has me really putting thought into the story; wondering about this and that. I LOVE stories that make me do that!
Great job!
Sincerely,
Roo
I really like how this one has me thinking! It left me with a deep impression and has me really putting thought into the story; wondering about this and that. I LOVE stories that make me do that!
Great job!
Sincerely,
Roo
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September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! I just read the 2nd chapter and I wasn't disappointed!! That was awesome and it'd be SOOOOO cool if you did more!
Great job again.
Sincerely,
Roo
P.S. Sorry there isn't really any constructive criticism I can think to give... Although I do LOVE how you set up the storytelling into chunks switching between past and present like that!
Great job again.
Sincerely,
Roo
P.S. Sorry there isn't really any constructive criticism I can think to give... Although I do LOVE how you set up the storytelling into chunks switching between past and present like that!
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June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God That was the shit I loooooved it, I dont know what else to say except please write more sasunaru Im just in awe thank you you should be paid for this Im still tingling all over I must go show this to my friends Oh God that was so good!!
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May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved everything about this fic... except for the fact that its a oneshot. I realize that you have your hands full with kyuubi the bitch (which is awesome!) but I would love if you made this into a chaptered fic. This really left me wanting more.
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May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am such a fucking idiot. How the hell did I miss that NEXT CHAPTER button.
Hello. I just wrote that review up there talking about how I loved this fic but thought that it could be longer than a oneshot. Well apparently you did too cuz it seems there was already a second chapter posted... how did I miss that? Anyway it was brilliant and here's my 2 cent about the possible 3rd and 4th part.
DO IT, DO IT!
Hello. I just wrote that review up there talking about how I loved this fic but thought that it could be longer than a oneshot. Well apparently you did too cuz it seems there was already a second chapter posted... how did I miss that? Anyway it was brilliant and here's my 2 cent about the possible 3rd and 4th part.
DO IT, DO IT!
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December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think you should, because as it is now, it feels like there is so much more to be done. Like, the fight between Sasuke and Sakura. I would actually looooove watching those two fight over Naruto. I also think, that Sasuke needs some relief. The guy maybe a bastard at the moment, but he really does love Naruto, whether unintentional or unnoticed till now, is yet to be seen.
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October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! this fic is so fuckin´awesome! Please, please continue.
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August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
they're both dicks, sasuke and kyuubi both. lol
more would be intersting.
more would be intersting.
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please make a 3rd and a 4th and a 5th and so on. That would be greatly appreciated.
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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I heart this fic ^_^ Can't wait for the third, fourth,...20th part lol Seriously though its very intense, emotional read and that you're able to do that as a writer is amazing!