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for A Troublesome Series of Events

by xireth

schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol wow. thats to much!! I dont know if I love Ino now, or hate her. And I think the 5th mind had a brain fart if she let him off that easy. I want to see her flick him into a wall 4 some reason. And can I jsut say sorry 4 the last review... I was down with something 4 few days and I just read my review.... that was not pretty... But just so u know ur doing a good job, u and ur buddy r doing great!!!!! Dont stop! And have a pineapple tart on me.
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew that was gonna happen at the end. XD I loved the "massage". I can't wait to see the confrontation. ^_^
person Jien
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There shall be a lot of tension between Naruto and Sasuke..UST I presume :3 update soon
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ni~ce chapter ^_^ *purr* I just love the smut between them! And now it's finally the grand revelation...I'm looking forward to Tsunade's reaction ^^ And of course to the parts where Naruto will move in with them ^_^ Keep going!!!
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! Update!!! fair worning im on a lot of cold meds...stuff... lol so this reveiw is going to be crazy, unreadable, and kinda stupid. I shoiuldnt even be reviewing right now but! yeah... Naruto is acting like such a child! lol, yet I find it funny. and Shika stay AWAY fromthe pink!!! It will corrupt u!!!!! pink is evil. I bet the devil wears pink... Ok off topic again. but YEAH narutos moving in, and I can so see the 5th flicking sasuke throw a walk for being getting smart with er lol. Im may be crazy, or just drugged up, but I think im really in love with this story! but u cant marry a book... or a web site... Yeah im gonna astop myself now. And I havent been cooking in the kitchen today so I havent made any yummy treats... sorry but no goodies today just me begging. ((Big fox kit eyes!)) Hope u keep updating!!!!
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, this chapter made me all warm and fuzzy inside. I can't wait to see Sasuke's reaction. ^_^
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooohh, Sasuke, Shika and Naruto rooming together?! Now THAT, I can't wait to read ^_^ Nicely done chapters - especially the scene with Naruto jumping Shika...HOT! Sorry, I didn't leave a review last time but I was just rushing out the door when I saw your update and I already got late to class because I read it o.O My teacher was not overly amused but I managed to calm him down ^_^ I just HAD to read your story! Keep going and I promise next time I'll leave a review right away ^_^
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwww
person Jien
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I can sense the threesome coming!!! (okay that was a bad innuendo)

nice chapter, please update soon!!
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, now there is a love triangle with poor Shika trapped in the middle. lol I personally like the idea of them sharing. ^_^

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