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April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why your fic doesn't have more reviews...
Ok... well I like it, and as for your question I don't mind that not everyone has the same image...
the only recomendation that I could do would be in... chapter 1? when they have the acciddent that you maybe could make that scene longer, I mean describe a little bit more what happened maybe?
I don't know... that the only thing I even hadn't notice that english wasn't your first languge (neither is mine but...)
hey! do you have like an update list or something?
Ok... well I like it, and as for your question I don't mind that not everyone has the same image...
the only recomendation that I could do would be in... chapter 1? when they have the acciddent that you maybe could make that scene longer, I mean describe a little bit more what happened maybe?
I don't know... that the only thing I even hadn't notice that english wasn't your first languge (neither is mine but...)
hey! do you have like an update list or something?
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to find out what happens
its pretty good
its pretty good
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I can't wait to read more. I like your portrayal of Naruto and Sasuke... all stoic and quiet... perfect.
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Humm. Really interesting fic.
I like the idea. xD
Neji and all being doctors.
So there is going to be SasuNaru.
But is Neji straight? I wish he isn't xD
Update soon!
I like the idea. xD
Neji and all being doctors.
So there is going to be SasuNaru.
But is Neji straight? I wish he isn't xD
Update soon!
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool story!!! Love that both Sasuke and Naruto still like each other but have obstacles to overcome. :)
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Moooooooooooooooooore ....i need to know what happens next...
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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this ought to be funny. i am looking forward to the next chapter. what a good what to start.
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nope...is not good. Not good at all! Its great ^^ scared you there for a second huh?! people do it to me...its a vicious cycle, you'll learn to love it. At any rate, very good, I love the detail and the setting. I like Naruto behavior towards Sasuke, not the tripping lover guy, but its fits well. He's not the guy whose hooked on his old rival who he "quote-unquote" had a undercover thing for.
This...the side-kick stalking...LOVE IT! I hope to hear more little stories about it later. Stealing Sasuke underwear and his homework...Sasuke would have a back-up...super freak.
Great job hun, looking forward to the next chapter.
This...the side-kick stalking...LOVE IT! I hope to hear more little stories about it later. Stealing Sasuke underwear and his homework...Sasuke would have a back-up...super freak.
Great job hun, looking forward to the next chapter.
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
any good?? very good! I loved it.. and I was so dissapointed when I found out there was only one chappie. MORE!! MORE!! *jumps up and down*
oh and there is italics on this site, you just have to use "commands" and I`m to lazy to find out the "codes".. but I guess you can ask around. ;P testing testing..
oh and there is italics on this site, you just have to use "commands" and I`m to lazy to find out the "codes".. but I guess you can ask around. ;P testing testing..
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nope.. that was definetly not the right code, although I made the text I wrote dissapear. hm...?? anywaaaaay; update! (^_^)