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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
phew lol he was successful, that could have went horribly wrong. nice fic.
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April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, well first, it was original. I'll be honest when I saw the name Shibuki I was a bit confused so I looked around and now I remember him. Whinney characters don't make much of an impression but hte OAV was good. Sas-ick managed to get tied up so quickly :D
While the fic was nice it seemed too--fluffy as a matter of speaking. Kisame was OOC but it was interesting to say the least. From what I could tell though your hand at spelling and grammar is much better than mine. So I'd give this fic 3 stars. It was good and original so thanks for sharing :)
While the fic was nice it seemed too--fluffy as a matter of speaking. Kisame was OOC but it was interesting to say the least. From what I could tell though your hand at spelling and grammar is much better than mine. So I'd give this fic 3 stars. It was good and original so thanks for sharing :)