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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the story, but It is awful when the end is so sad I get sad reading it, but you are right, it show reall well love and it's strenght
I hope to read more soon, I've been reading lonely faces too, I hope you make a happier ending there! PLEASE!
I hope to read more soon, I've been reading lonely faces too, I hope you make a happier ending there! PLEASE!
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A slightly abrupt and anti-climatic ending plus Orochimaru realizes the power of love... gah, so cheesy.
But other than that, the story was really good. Not bad for a first attempt. Keep up the good work! You can only improve from here. ^^
But other than that, the story was really good. Not bad for a first attempt. Keep up the good work! You can only improve from here. ^^
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was finnaly able to edit the summary and re-posted it.