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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, kinda interesting and well wierd. I cant picture the brothers sharing, but it could make for some interesting situations. Just please dont make naruto a girl! Its just not the same when that gets done. Thanks for sharing this.
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what happened to chapter three?
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think they think its depressing because everyone is dead. But I think its awesome! Its a twist I have never seen before! you could make it a little more detailed like maybe someone telling Naruto exactly what happened? Please continue to update!
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I don't find it depressing. If anything I find it has a little bit of twisted humor in it. I really enjoy reading this. I hope you keep this story.
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. as in wow. i can perfectly conclude that i will read this story until its end. please update soon. i can feel the excitement rising. cant wait for the next chappie. XD
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a story! Is good, even though I don't particulary like when the "evil" wins. But even so I really like the plot and am really curius about the jutsu!!! I also liked how they still make naruto important even without kyuubi because sometimes it seems like that is the center of everything, even though I don't know if you will relate it to something else later on
anyway: WRITESOON PLEASE!!!
anyway: WRITESOON PLEASE!!!
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April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OoO! I like it!
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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it because its different. Not like all the others. Excellent keep them coming.
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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ugh! Twisted!~~~
The Uchiha bastard brothers is a real appropriate name for those two.
The Uchiha bastard brothers is a real appropriate name for those two.
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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad your still writing this story. Loved the little bit of Lemony goodness at the end. Poor Naruto, going from Ninja to sex toy. Can't wait to read more.
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