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by narugal101

schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YEA! NARUTO IS FINALLY IN LOVE WITH SOMEONE, WHO I'M THANKFUL IS KAKASHI AND NOT SASUKE! 'CAUSE SASUKE IS A BASTARD! AND KAKASHI NEEDS SOME LOVEN!
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story!
It's a bit of an emotional roller-coaster in the later chapters, but that's good cause your characters are going through an emotional roller-coaster.
Believe me, I know how hard that's to get across to readers.
Personally, I want this to turn out to be a SasuNaru, but will read to the very end even if it turns out to be something else.
I hope you pick the pairing you want and not what us readers want, because I happen to think when writers pick what they want the story turns out much better.
Anyway, I completely enjoyed this and hope it's updated again soon.
Oh, I only ask for one thing, you can ignore it if you want, but please, please don't let Sasuke end up with Sakura in the long run.
I would rather see Sasuke end up with Orochimaru than her, sorry I just have a great humongous dislike for SasuSaku. ^^;
Anyway, can't wait to see how your exciting story turns out. ^_^
♥++
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLease NO!!! SASUNARU!!!! GAWD!! Please dont let naruto end up with the uchiha
That is just too over done!!! OH OH you might think of a reverse herame.Did i spell that right? ANYWAY!!
PLEASE NO SASUNARU!!!but i do like the kakashi...hint,hint;)
person SasUke28
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
bOOO, you suck, where the action! XD,just kidding, update when you can!

Ja,
-Pepsi
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo!! NarutoxHaku for the win! hehehe I like how at ease he felt with Haku. Perhaps emotions wouldn't be so hard a concept for him to accept if he wasn't surrounded by such pushy perverted bastards all the time. >:)

Keep up the good work!
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Let Sssuke and Sakura burn in the fires of hell! And yes, I do hate you for that chapter, I hate two-timers!
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, honestly, I don't see what there is in this story that really is offensive. (Unless, of course, you're offended by M/M pairings.) There's no pedophilia. Sasuke and Naruto are the same age. Besides, this story is awesome. Anyone who complains are just haters.

You rock. (Oh, and I agree, people who withhold updates for reviews are assholes. Write the story or don't. THat shit pisses me off.)
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter better then I did the last one, not that I'm saying that the other one was bad or anything. Plus, I didn't think that there was going to be Haku/Naru action, not that I hate it.
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man those were very unexpected chapters. Awesome chapters but truly unexpected. I haven't read a Haku/Naru before so now I'm really hope that's what happens. At first I rooting for sasu/naru because that's my fav pairing but it like a little variety. It's the spice of life. Anyway back to your story, I loved the whole Haku being in charge. I'm glad Naruto feels warmth from Haku especially after that whole Sasuke screw-up. Sasuke really pisses me off, him screwing Sakura just so that he could see Naruto break. Too bad for him Naruto went emotionless before that happened. I hope Naruto isn't to hurt about the whole Sasuke thing when he regains his emotions again. I hope someone will be there to help him get over it... *cough* Haku *cough* ;)
I can't wait for the next chapter.
=)
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke's a jerk! Naruto should bite him. >:)

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