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for Suprise! The Zipper

by TheColorsofSand

person SasUke28
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, poor Naruto! XD, hot smex, I liked how you made Sasuke kinky and a pushy uke! XD, it was funny too, they're really dirty! But, it would be so true if this really happened! XD, more! Great Job!

-Pepsi
person lindsey
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO.
This was great. Who woulda thunk you could do that on a ride? Hah
Naruto's totally in for it now!
Awesome job. ^__^
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
............wow............for the first time EVER i've found narusasu hot! i didn't think it was possible! god job
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's just so wrong, poor Manda! But the story was good. Thanks for the laugh.
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Animal abuse!!!! A snake is not going to tolerate that, no matter how well its trained. o_O Somebody's gonna get bit! :x


hehehehe funny story. Great job!
person HyperBlueKitten
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Truely a genus fan-fiction! I loved the sexiness, funniness, and excitement of one of my favorite Naruto yaoi couples (SASUNARU aka NARUSASU FOREVER~!~!!) in the carnival, great job on "Suprise! The Zipper" !!! ^~^
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! that was hilarious! and the smut was good as well ;)
person sesshysangel18
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved your story the last part was funny. poor neji though/

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