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for Original Sin

by Shiruy

schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
>.< u hav no idea how long i hav waited for u to update and even though i had to wait i was not disappointed XD this pairing is the next best to naruneji or nejinaru i will die a horrible and gruesome death if u dont write another chapter(^^no pressure of course)u r doing and awesome job watevr ur doing dont stop newho
Ja, matta/later deedeesan
person H.
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good... Uchihacest just suck! Why pl dont write more MinaNaru!?! Why? They are so much better!
And I'll die if we get 3some with Itachi...I'll die and wouldnt that be a sweet great death from blood lose//nose bleeding?!
You are so evill! I so want Minato with Itachi right now (and of course our Naru-chan) right nowwwww *cry* Aw I beg you for more of Itachi ;3
Sorry for this creppy review but I cant write anything better cuz my brain is damaged XO
Thank you so much for writting this story ;*
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I'm not usually into incest, but this fic is sweet.
person HikariAi
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NICE, very nice.... Update soon, ne... ^_^
person Anon
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG *sosososohappy* AHH! YOU CONTINUED! *drools all over the place* This story is ah-mazing! I cannot believe how much I love this pairing now (damn you for that! since it's almost impossible to find anything on it!). *sighs* I'm keeping my eyes on this one!

<3

If you could, do you think you could email me so I know when you update again?

mizu-benten@hotmail.com
person Anon
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Also, if you could, do you think you could email me so I know when you update again?

mizu-benten@hotmail.com
person Anon
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have made me -so- happy. :3
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that story must be the hottest i have ever read i have probably died about 25 times, 50 nosebleeds,fainting at least 30 times i dont know wat u did but that has never happened to me before if u do not finish this i think i will die a sudden and unfortunate death =^_^= kudasai please write another chapter this is why being a yaoi girl is so hard and this story i s very intriguing i hav seen a pairing with them before but not as father and son and u have gotten a real reaction out of me for each line i must have screamed myself hoarse i had people running over to me to see if i was alright ja ne lata ,deedeesan xDDDDDDDDDDDDD definiteley luv ur fic u will be on my fave authors list
person Kate
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story.... Plz update soon.... :)
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say this is the first time I have seen this pairing and OMFG!! *Drools* I love it. Wonderful job. Hard to believe this is your first lemon hun. Beautiful without being too fluffy. I LOVE YOU!

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