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This story has made me laugh quite a bit, and now it got serious. Can hardly wait for the next chapter.

Well, I can honestly say I enjoyed that. Sakura is being such a greedy girl [having three hot studs to play with whenever she wants] and I feel her on wanting to see some hot yaoi action. Anyway that plays out is bound to be hotter then all hell and I can't wait. Thanks for another awesome chapter and I await the next. ~ Kenya

P.S. Would be nice if a sista could get some kind of alert for when you update. To bad AFF don't have that kind of system here. [or do they?]

the new chapter made me so happy!:) i've had a really bad day and this totally lifted my mood)))
but,personally,i think that sasuke deserves waaaay more teasing! he's still being an idiot ... after reading the update i also have a scene of sasuke walking in on the foursome stuck in my head. something along the lines of:
' Sasuke couldn't believe that the mass of writhing bodies on Sai's carpet were his former teammates and sensei and....that boy.
They had spared him a glance,all right. Had spared him a glance and gone right back to what they'd been doing before he'd barged into the apartment leaving him gaping like a fish out of water by the open door.
Sai smiled his enigmatic, vengeful, little smile; he knew by Sakura's look that the girl's inner persona was shouting something along the lines of <>.
Naruto's head enthusiastically bobbed up and down Kakashi's cock in agreement to that sentiment.'

looking forward to the next chap :D

This is a fantastic story, great how you have everyone. Keep up the great work!

Really great chapter! Loved Naruto's "dying" scene, it was hilarious. I'd been looking forward to this update for a while, hope there's another one not too far away. Thanks for sharing.

I've absolutely adored this read. I wish I could review it thoroughly, but I couldn't stop READING it long enough to do so! Fantastic! The dynamics are funny and corny at times, but very believable. I like how human and down-to-earth everything is. Very relatable. And I ADORE how you've made them all torture Sasuke. That's fucking sweet.

All in all, I loved it, and I can't wait for more. The sex is wonderful, but your dialog and interactions will bring me back with all the ardor of a rabid fan!

ok, so this is like, the third or fourth time i've come back, so i can finish the chapter and review. damn life. sasuke is right, just cause sakuradoesn't really trust him yet doesn't mean she doesn't *not* trust at all. ich. i think that makes sense.

So: to my best lines out of the whole damn chapter, which i loved darling, thank you!

The onyx gaze narrowed. "Your 'dying breath,' and you can't come up with anything original?"
". . . I hear you hit like a girl."
Sasuke spluttered.

(i just bet he would!!)

He cut her off, "Wait . . . That's not what I want to say. . ." He cupped her cheek in her hand . . . "I know you think I love you . . . but that's a lie. I've been . . . using you to get closer to someone else . . . "
She blinked. 'What the . . .?'
". . . Tell your mom . . . I said hi."

Oh, Dina-chan, that was cruel. but halarious. you make me laugh and i've needed that. thanks much !! hurry up on the next chappie, damnit!!

OMG! A new chapter THANK YOU! Also thanks for replying to my last comments, it made my night ;)

*giggles like a maniac* You are soooooooooooooo awesome. I kept checking every few days after I finished up to the previous chapter. I am incredibly happy to read your fic. You sense of humor is wickedly awesome. I laugh for a long time and keep thinking about it off and on. I've re-read what you have written more times than I can cound on two hands and feet. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I have to say that this was a hilarious chapter. I loved the continuous duck butt jokes and the naruto drying drama. Please update soon because i cant catch my breath. ^_^