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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
your story fuckin rocks. Very detailed and well written, and to say these types of things is a really big deal for me. Cause I'm hella picky when it comes to reading certain stories, and I must say I really enjoyed reading yours the most. Continue writting please.
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was brilliant! XD The dialog totally made my day. I'm so never going to watch Aladin again without laughing myself to tears, too. Keep it up! *goes check other stuff you wrote*
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“Fine, whatever… You’re a drag, Sasuke. That is why I’ll be out there instead of here.”
ouch! wow, that hurt me!
Ahhh... I love your Sasuke. We all have alittle bit of your Sasuke in us;p
sweet, vulnerable and a bit of an ass all at the same time. Just like us!!! well me anyway.
I like this. It's fun having these different scenarios on their "first time".
thanks for the fun!:)
ouch! wow, that hurt me!
Ahhh... I love your Sasuke. We all have alittle bit of your Sasuke in us;p
sweet, vulnerable and a bit of an ass all at the same time. Just like us!!! well me anyway.
I like this. It's fun having these different scenarios on their "first time".
thanks for the fun!:)
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Review to tell you again, that 'sucky-sucky five dollar' is the best line ever in the whole of fanfiction.
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahah. I love this story. The banter is very witty too. excellent job on that. stories like this slowly convert me into a NaruSasu-shipper, which is a huge compliment since I will forever be a devout Uchihacest fan!
unless you keep writing...
unless you keep writing...
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cute story! You have a humorous way of writing. ^_^ I like it very much.
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this was so great! I love your sense of humor!!! XD The whole "don't touch me there" thing was priceless, LOL. The whole story was perfect, I could so see that happening with those two in just that way!
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice!
I must say, I like the ending. Made me laugh quite alot.
XD
I must say, I like the ending. Made me laugh quite alot.
XD
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mah! I loved it! Naruto-kun and Sasuke-kun are so cute together. And I'm glad that you made it so Sasuke doesn't hate Sakura (those get old, fast). Just had to say that I loved it!
Neko
Neko
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god that was Adorable!!! XD. I love when you're writing *hugs u* This had a great mix of angst and humour that you don't com across very often in a oneshot. Your Sasuke was adorable a always and Naruto XD. *shakes head* I love that boy. Thanks for writing this ♥