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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, this is fantastic. It's well written, funny, cute, and SEXY AS HELL. Loved the end, Sasuke and Naruto fluff is LOVE. Haha, and all I couldn't help thinking "ow, rugburn" when they did the dirty on the carpet. Sasuke's ass will be doubly tender.
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
KKXXX has done it again.
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. So cute and funny, i loved it.
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, wow...just...wow-WOW! OMG, WTF, ZOMG! Okay, here I go:
I CAN'T LAUGHT ANYMORE, THIS STORY TOOK IT OUT OF ME! YOUR HUMOR IS BY FAR THE BEST, I WORSHIP YOU...waiiiiit-nope, that's weird, I admired your work!!XD, great story, it had me ROFL'ing faster than I read-
" “You need to figure out a way to save this party! It’s going down faster than-“
“A Tijuana whore?” Naruto offered up helpfully.
“Actually, I was going to say the Titanic. Naruto, do something!”
“What the heck do you want me to do?”
Sakura flailed- exasperation and desperation evident. “I don’t know! Do something Naruto-esque. Sasuke-kun, make him do something.”
Sasuke only raised an eyebrow. “Tijuana whores?”
Naruto flashed one of his patented, aggravating grins. “Sucky-sucky, five dollar?” "
Favorite part by the way! Lol, tijuanna whores? No touching me there? Shamefull acts of rim-jobs? Oh, poor Sasuke, he must deal with Naruto for the rest of his life.XD, Naruto's a demon, my golly goshers (why Gai, why must you influence my lingo). Anyways, great flow, and it wasn't gaudy, loved it! Hehe, screwed up confessions, I had one of those before, I believe it went up like this-
"Hey, I think you're kind of hot and that I might wanna go out with you, why don't you ask for my number?"
I will not name the reasons on how this sentence is wrong in so many ways...XD, continue up witht he greatness of comedy my friend. Youth (WTF-LEE, GAI, OFF MY LAPTOP, NOOOOOOW!)Ja ne!
-Pepsi
I CAN'T LAUGHT ANYMORE, THIS STORY TOOK IT OUT OF ME! YOUR HUMOR IS BY FAR THE BEST, I WORSHIP YOU...waiiiiit-nope, that's weird, I admired your work!!XD, great story, it had me ROFL'ing faster than I read-
" “You need to figure out a way to save this party! It’s going down faster than-“
“A Tijuana whore?” Naruto offered up helpfully.
“Actually, I was going to say the Titanic. Naruto, do something!”
“What the heck do you want me to do?”
Sakura flailed- exasperation and desperation evident. “I don’t know! Do something Naruto-esque. Sasuke-kun, make him do something.”
Sasuke only raised an eyebrow. “Tijuana whores?”
Naruto flashed one of his patented, aggravating grins. “Sucky-sucky, five dollar?” "
Favorite part by the way! Lol, tijuanna whores? No touching me there? Shamefull acts of rim-jobs? Oh, poor Sasuke, he must deal with Naruto for the rest of his life.XD, Naruto's a demon, my golly goshers (why Gai, why must you influence my lingo). Anyways, great flow, and it wasn't gaudy, loved it! Hehe, screwed up confessions, I had one of those before, I believe it went up like this-
"Hey, I think you're kind of hot and that I might wanna go out with you, why don't you ask for my number?"
I will not name the reasons on how this sentence is wrong in so many ways...XD, continue up witht he greatness of comedy my friend. Youth (WTF-LEE, GAI, OFF MY LAPTOP, NOOOOOOW!)Ja ne!
-Pepsi
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very cute! And very hot. A perfect combination.
I loved it :)
I loved it :)