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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First of all, thanks for reviewing my story! As you may have noticed, recognition is a wonderful thing. Second, I definitely like yours. I'm not usually a big fan of the characters outside of Japan in general, but I think they made the perfect tourists in this, so consider me converted. The only complaints I have is the lack of spacing and/or indentions in paragraphs and the lack of possessive apostrophes, both of which are minor. Otherwise, this was a really excellent oneshot. Hope to see more!
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HEEE my first birthday lemon. <3!! Thank you!! I don't know the canon well, but I know writing. THANK you!!
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really HOT!! I love team 7 action. Looking forward to more.
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Rox
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot and funny. When Naruto said "Why is the rum gone?" it had me cracking up. Good fic ^_^