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June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!! What a story! It did have an interesting plot but.... What A Ride!!! OMG!!! Is because of authors like you that Im turning into such a perv!!!! I never never read about THIS kind of ride! But don't get me wrong! I am NOT complaining!!! I just wanted you to remember that you are feeding my pervertedness(is that even a word?), and you are really GOOD AT IT! I hope you have new ideas Soon!
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June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a really hot story, is this meant to have been one of the multi-chapter one shots or is it just a stand alone. i hope that you will put up a chapter of midnight's moon soon please, i am a fiend. hope to see either that or another one shot soon.
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June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One word...HOT!!!! I love how you wrote the D/S scene while still keeping it tender and sweet :-) Definitely was a wild ride...maybe you could add more chapters to this of other adventures they have and give a little of the back story of how Naruto came to be Sasuke's pet.
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June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.O Um....I don't think I should read these stories at work anymore. At least without a change of clothing....