rate_review Reviews

Wow. That was like, a perfect 2nd chapter to 'Iruka's Pain'
Honestly, it was fantastic. I even got a little teary-eyed when Kakashi found his tags. And even more so when Iruka found him sobbing his eyeballs out.
It was more than what I'm used to. I don't usually do angsty, or even the continuation of it. But I am so glad that I did. This story, and the one it follows are both extremely well written.
Kudos and REALLY big cookies C:

Ja ne

silent tears wet me face. Silent tears. man this was so so sad and great at the same time. i still dont know what to make of it. they deserve each other.

nice story .. ^^ it would have been good if there was some action... but then again I am a perv and all that I look for is the action... but the plot is great and the story is great too can't wait to read more of your works ^^

OMG! thank you Sarge/R3b3lliousr3b3l for leting you make a sequel and thank you for writing it and posting it!
I love the one shot by Sarge, but it made me cry and be depressed and i totally love it that you were able to make them work it out in the end!
thank you thank you thank you! i totally love this! (ok, i know it's much, but i'm just super happy about this)!!!!
*goes to read it again* i just love it too much!

The first one was sad but I still thought it was a great story, it's too bad she doesn't post here. Actually while I read the first one I just kept telling myself that you had written a sequel and that you would definitely find a way to keep them together (at least that's what i was hoping). Reading yours though just made me want to give both of those guys a really good shake or burst into tears, perfect example of why they need to learn to communicate (silly boys). Another great story I loved the raw emotions between the two it really made you feel for them, I also like how we find out at the end that Tenzou knew all along that there was something going on between them :)