rate_review Reviews

I loved the line 8 ways to hell and back. Great job. Can't wait to read more.
Rox

This was good, better than some things I've seen in a while really. My only qualm is that it gets kind of hard to understand in parts. You have a weird way of wording your sentences and a tendency to leave them unfinished. I would suggest going back over it to reword some stuff and complete anything that isn't. Other than that, I really enjoyed it.