rate_review Reviews

Wow. Besides some missing punctuation (which most people don't care about at all, just happens to be my peeve lol), that was actually really good! I can see that I'll definitely be looking for an update on this one. But I have to give you a word of advice: fix the spelling errors in the summary ('grandson' and 'being'). A sloppy summary usually means a sloppy story and most people won't give it a second glance. I know I have been passing by it since yesterday, I just clicked on it today because there no other updates anywhere. I'm glad I gave it a chance, but most people won't. So fix those spelling errors and I'd bet you'd get a LOT more readers.

But really, good job. I'm looking forward to an update! :)