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September 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was good but a bit twisted at the last minute. I almost wish it was longer so I could find out if one of the pigs (Sakura/Ino) was going to take the devils deal.
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May 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I do really enjoy all your twisted fairy tales, and putting Itachi as the devil, very nice touch. I don't think I'd ever read that story but I have heard of it before, I like your twist on it.
Thanks for sharing!
p.s. wow this is the first time i've been able to leave a review here, i think ever...nice.
Thanks for sharing!
p.s. wow this is the first time i've been able to leave a review here, i think ever...nice.
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if you still read reviews for this story but I'm gonna review anyway.
That was a "devilishly" beautiful story. It was it was familiar enough to be comforting but unique enough to be interesting. It gives me hope for my own twisted Naruto fairytale. Thank you for a beautiful story and giving me hope to write my own.
That was a "devilishly" beautiful story. It was it was familiar enough to be comforting but unique enough to be interesting. It gives me hope for my own twisted Naruto fairytale. Thank you for a beautiful story and giving me hope to write my own.
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story! I couldnt stop reading, even when I needed to get to bed for class! I am a fan of yours, and have enjoyed all works I have read thus far. Please, continue to astound us all with your amazing tales! Thank you!
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU FOR SHARING!!!!!!!
I love your humour and the story is hilarious.
I love your humour and the story is hilarious.
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was definitely better than the original. More detail and better characters.
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow your stories are still the best ones!!!!!!!
No one else can descripe their characters as good as you! (even in a fairytale)
I love your fics everyone of them, i hope you write another one soon.
Maybe a Mpreg again ;-)
No one else can descripe their characters as good as you! (even in a fairytale)
I love your fics everyone of them, i hope you write another one soon.
Maybe a Mpreg again ;-)
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September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was an awesome read, lex. keep up the great work. I look forward to reading your next fic.
~Devious
~Devious
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a lot of fun to read. Nice work!
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do believe that is the oddest piece of fiction I have ever read, and thats really all I have to say. Don't ask me if that is a good thing or a bad thing, because I honestly don't know!