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for Slave for you

by DarthValgaav

schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
pure genius, keep it up. Just don't wait so long between updates again,thought you quit writing
schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
keep the story coming can't wait to read more see how the new girl is.
schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm bettin on Sasame, with Isaribi as a close second
schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it's good to see you again! but you left a lot open with hint! (is it Sasame? I hope so!)anyways, I hope you update soon.
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is by far one of my favorite stories, kudos to you man... I hope you update soon the whole slave thing had me hooked. I would love to see some anal and also some punishment (light bondage, spanking) things of that sort nothing to extreme.
person nm1716
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. I hope you start updating ti again. Hope to be able to read some more soon!!
person havoc795
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
all I have to say is, please, PLEASE continue. I love the story so far and Im dieing to know what happens next. keep up the great work
person VFSNAKE
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I had an idea for the next chapter. Have Naruto choose Sasuke's punishment and have the punishment be to spend a single day with Anko as HER slave. LOL! Just a thought. Also, I look forward to you updating your other fic. PLEASE DO!
person fayt098
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i just read the 5 chapters you had up and i washed you put up more. and if you don't mind me saying so the guy how say naruto has too much girls is just crazy. i mean for one naruto has been treated like crap and i beat he's been rape when he was a kid. two alot of the girls naruto meet had the same life as him (though i think naruto has had it worse then anyone). and three naruto is the only one how can fill that viod in there heart and his so the guys a idoit to say naruto has too many (i can't tell you how many times i wish naruto was a heram and with his shadow clone jutsu i bet he can please anyones and look at negi, he's only ten and he has 31 girl in love with him (give or take a few)thats also why negima is my favorite anime and manga and fanfiction. so how come its wrong to let naruto have so many girls.) anyways i getting off track. i think isuribi should be with naruto since because of her life. but i think hanabi and tenten is good for naruto to and you know what they say "sometimes sister think alike" (not to meanteni always like the to of them) and i also thing the princess that naruto meet decerve him and so does yakumo. really i can't decide, you can pick for me. anyways i think your doing a great job. can't wait for more
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey lets have Temari get raped and fucked, and KAnkuro uses a bunch of Sex based tools to take on Hinita. Also great story, I really enjoy it

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