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by YamiKaeko

person asm613
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm very intrigued by your story. It has lots of potential to be a superior story. You're story telling abilty has not disappointed. There's enough mystery to keep the reader coming back for more. I absolutely love your Kyuubi character so far_talk about comic relief. The interaction between Minato, Naruto and Kyuubi is also well done. I very much like your physical description of Naruto_I'm looking forward to reading about Sasuke's physical appearance and the interactions between Naruto and Sasuke along with Kyuubi and Itachi. If I've read correctly; you've described Sasuke's eyes as blue-grey sometimes and sometimes onyx_are they blue or black or do they change--that's the only thing I am confused about. I look forward to reading more of your story. Keep up the good work. Thanks for taking the time to share the story with us.
person Word_Slave
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this has a very interesting plot I'm enjoying it, but really cant' wait to know what's going on with Naruto and Orochimaru
person Anon
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Hurry with the next chapter!!
person gaara89
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good job so far. I'm liking the whole Vampire idea, and you've definitely gone about it in a different way than the other people in this fandom. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to chapter four.


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