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person Anise
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well that was definitely a different start to sex between these two and as for shortcomings, there really wasn't any that I could see I thought it was fabulous! :) I'm hoping there will be some more I would love to see what happens once they get home, poor Kakashi having to be in Sound for three years he definitely deserves to have a little vacation and relax with a certain cute chuunin ;)
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
::huge, cat-and-canary grin::
Thank you for putting this up after I had a long, rough day trying to make a final project behave. I intend to leave a better review than "zomg you saved my BRAIN," like how I liked this, and why, and why it's lovely, because it is, but frankly, it's three in the morning and I have to work today, but now I'm not stressed and depressed!
Now I'm giggling and happy and sly, and I like this way much better. ^^ I always like your fic, dear. Thanks.
person RyuEarth
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My review is going to sound so noobish, but I completely love this story! XD
I totally love this, and I like how Iruka and Kakashi interacted with eachother! =)
My brain has gone numb ^^;

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