rate_review Reviews

O.O oh my gosh i plead temporary insanity on behalf of rai lmao that was ridiculously thrilling to read. i was like oh my gosh!!!!! i hope kashi forgives him.

it's nice that iruka will be free. i hope their relationship gets stronger. and iruka isn't used like a pawn against kashi.

these last few chapters were real exciting ^_^

...*blink blink blink*.... *blink*.... wow..... well that was.... wow... I was kind of thinking that would turn into a dream... wow.... interesting :)

I still have a bad feeling about what's going to happen, but I loved the way you described Asuma and Kurenai! XD
I loved them! And I wish Genma all the luck in the world! ^^
THanks for the update!

I was out of town for the last 3 updates. It was like Christmas early to come back to all three new chapters. I love this story and can't wait to see more. Thanks for all your hard work.

this story is awesome! such passion! Rai is lost in passion... he doesn't realize what he's done in the heat of the moment. i just hope that his and kashi's relationship is repairable... it won't ever be the same again, but i hope the trust can be restored...

but that kiss... all his feelings? frustration? emotion? how he felt was conveyed in that kiss... Ruka has a serious rival in him... he [Rai] won't be forgetting Kashi so easily...

all of this turmoil? raw emotion? transpiring in the middle of a hostile takeover... they still have no idea who the co-conspirators are...

the only thing i can say is thank kami for ruka and genma, their cooler heads will prevail, they've got rai's and kashi's backs.

Yay! I love Genma so much like that lol, I hope that he will be able to take care of Raidou!
But I've got a feeling that something bad is going to happen T_T
Thanks for the update! XD

Damn!!! That was Hawt! Doesn't seem to me that the story got away from you at all!

wooooo
that was hot!!

gooo iruka...
yay kakashi

please update more
more
more
MOTTO!!


um.... i mean....

*gives cookies*

omf that was so effin hot!

wow.... *DROOLS*


but how dare raidou do that to kakashi!!!

what will be his punishment sesshou-san?

and is there gonna b somethin deeper with genma and raidou --assuming that raidou gets to live after what he did to kakashi....

please update

*gives ookies*

wow this last chapter was so intense. they really need to learn how to knock before walk into one another's tents! i was practically squirming during the sex scene... i was like "JUST WALK OUT RAI! DON'T DO IT! DON'T DO IT!" whoa... but he did. you're a really fantastic writer.