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for Under the clouds

by animeluney

person liz
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
a beautifully written stroy...it felt so natural, how everything came together...lovely<3
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww! That was so cute. Then again, I'm a sucker fro ShikaNeji. It's just so adorable. And this one, was really fun and sweet.
person Sanee
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was so sweet. However, I will say that the transition to the smut was a bit abrupt; it seemed like they didn't show much feeling for each other except for a kiss or two.

But it was still enjoyable.
person MeLaiya
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aw, that as so sweet. I really liked it. Please keep up the good work and update soon.
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was beautiful. It had some kind of serene feeling to it that made me smile. Yet both of their actions seemed so 'in character' that I had no problems envisioning them just like you described them. Thanks for sharing!
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, I do wish it was longer. There could have been more detail, but as far as one-shots go that was really good. I love the buildup and all, but as I said, I wish it were longer!

Great job on your first ShikaNejiShika! Can't wait to see more from you!

Peace-Love-Yaoi

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