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Dammit. You'd gone to bed, I missed you, decided to read. Now I'm a big puddle of GUH!, thank you very much.

Finish this. Soooon! *shakes fist*

i like it continue with the story. plz

O_o Holy crapazoids, that was amazing! Oh, such depth of character and plot, even in just this first part. I hope you're able to update soon, I'll be on the edge of my seat in anticipation until you do. ^^

. . . Holy fucking wow. I laughed, I cried, I had to fan myself and ward off nosebleeds. If this is what you're capable of with longer works, I may not survive. You should totally continue this, darlin'. And I'll probably be the only one to tell you that the fade-out worked. Just wish I could get away with it on mine. *rolls eyes*

*bows and worships and fangirls all over your shoes*

-Dina

no doubt i lost the review sherry, so i take juice and seed. *drools* dammit, i want to know how much went on between naru and kakashi!!! *pulls out author whip* out, bratling, write it out!!!

Excellent beginning. I'm interested to know where you'll go with it.

Yay for Feion and her ideas. XD lol *hug* I love it. It's totally awesome. And for once I liked how the actual sex wasn't written out between Naruto and Kakashi. It added a niceness to the chapter I suppose. I don't know how to put it. lol Anywho, it was good. :) I can't wait to read more. ^_^